文档介绍：2013高考上海卷英语作文点评
II. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an position in 120-150 words according to the instructions given in Chinese.
上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展,现就展出场所(博物馆还是社区图书馆)征集公众意见,假设你是王敏,给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求:
1. 简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择;
2. 说明你的理由(从便利性,专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比)
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I’ve just learned that Shanghai Museum is to hold a famous painting exhibition and you’re collecting public suggestions about which location to hold it. I’m writing this letter to share with you my opinions. As far as I’m concerned, it is more reasonable to hold the painting exhibition in Shanghai Museum than munity libraries. My reasons are as follows.
On the one hand, it is more convenient for people to reach Shanghai Museum, located in the center of the city. Visitors can go there by subway and bus and so on. What’s more, Shanghai Museum is much more extensive munity libraries, providing visitors with a fortable environment to appreciate the famous paintings.
On the other hand, Shanghai Museum, a well-known and distinguished museum at home and abroad, is more professional in holding painting exhibitions. What’s of great significance is that not only does it provide advanced facilities and high-tech monitors but also offers professional security guards to protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen in the process of exhibition.
Consequently, I strongly propose that the painting exhibition is to be held in the Shanghai Museum.
Yours,
Wang Min
赏析:
今年上海市的高考英语作文话题贴近学生的生活实际,用书信的载体呈现,让考生对画展感觉到有话可以说,但是想要达到A类作文,不仅需要有扎实语言功底,还需要对博物馆和社区图书馆及画展等生活类的语言应用娴熟,更需要学生从专业一点的角度,深入分析其选择的理由,这个层面很多学生很难用专业的语言区描述,学生平时学****时间紧张,没有时间到社会上参加一些社会活动,而且在紧张的时间里,更别提用一些复杂的语言结构区展示自己的理由,所以学生写到高分不是很容易,大部分学生得到15/16分是没有问题的。采取这样的命题思路对英语教学有较好的反馈作用,学校和家庭不仅仅督促学生的学****更要提供机会让孩子走出课堂,走向社会,培养学生创造性和批判性思维。
提示:
生活类词汇: museum library painting exhibition advanced facility high- tech monitor security guard
分词的应用:located providing distinguished
句型:主语从句标语从句倒装等
2012年上海高考英语作文
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