文档介绍：Writing
DISCUSSION:
What is a good writing?
Content: everything needed included which is related to
your view.(内容要完整)
Structure:
* Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾)
* anized and smoothly developed
(结构合理,行文流畅)
Language:
* No Chinglish (避免中文式英文)
* No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误)
* With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns
(词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)
I'm very pleased to tell you the changes of my life since the reduction of learning load was brought in. Before that, I was often exhausted at weekends. I attended school and had classes the whole day. In the evening,I was often forced to do my boring homework and I could not go to bed until 11:30. Since the program of reducing learning load was introduced, my life, however, has e much more interesting. I frequently pay a visit to museums, drop in puter rooms and draw pictures in my leisure time. After lunch, I watch TV, read stories and look through newspapers to enrich myself. No longer do I stay up; on the contrary, I go to bed at about 10 . In short, I am quite satisfied with my life now.
Structure
Enjoy the following paragraphs:
Now in the country areas, there are many children out of school. The reasons can be listed as follow.
____________, most families are too poor to send their children to school. __________, they have no choice but to stay at home and make money.
as a result; In addition ;
To begin with ; However
To begin with
As a result
使用恰当的连接词 Use proper linking words
__________, some parents think there is no need for their daughters to go to school. Therefore, they don’t let them go to school.
_______, some children are not interested in their studies. ______________________, some wouldn’t like to go to school.
In my opinion; Finally ;
To make matters worse ; In addition
In addition
Finally
To make matters worse
As far as I’m concerned, all the children including girls should be educated. _______, the whole society should put great emphasis on children