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2025年申论作文写作如何写分论点(推荐21篇)
篇1:申论作文写作如何写分论点
申论作文写作如何写分论点
申论笔试对于文章写作越来越注重考生文章写作的深度。而这一点通常在写作要求当中呈现出来,出题人会要求大家:见解深刻、有思想。那么对于很多考生来讲如何才能达到考官的要求,能够在考试当中让自己的文章更胜一筹、脱颖而出呢?下面就一起来了解看看申论作文写作如何写分论点吧!










其实,申论文章角度的选择通常要与作答要求中的“分析深刻”联系在一起。“分析深刻”是要求考生就材料某一点进行深入分析。材料中的一句话,考生却可以将它扩充为一段话,这就是分析深刻。具体如何达到分析深刻,就要求大家在论点选择的角度上下足功夫。
角度越小越好

总论点:改进征地工作,构建和谐社会。
分论点:
第一,改进征地工作是社会主义本质属性的要求。
第二,改进征地工作是贯彻落实科学发展观的要求。
第三,改进征地工作是建设社会主义新农村的要求。

总论点:优化土地利用方式,保障耕地刻不容缓。
分论点:
第一,优化土地利用方式,是控制土地退化的有力手段。
第二,优化土地利用方式,是保证耕地面积的重要保障。
第三,优化土地利用方式,是维护土地资源质量的有效策略。

比较两个示例。先看总论点,的总论点为“改进征地工作,构建和谐社会”。“和谐社会”与“科学发展观”类似,是解决所有问题的根本出路,立意宏观,立论角度过大。相对而言,的总论点落在“保持耕地”上,内容更有针对性,角度较小,更易驾驭。
再看分论点,的'分论点比总论点的角度还要大,社会主义本质属性的问题明显是凌驾于和谐社会问题之上的,是更高层次的问题。而的分论点从“控制土地退化”、“保证耕地面积”、“维护土地资源质量”三方面着手选取小角度,使文章更务实。










角度越容易越好
角度容易就是角度不要太偏,要容易驾驭。考生要尽量从材料中发现论点,这样既符合紧扣材料的要求,又可以有更多的参考资料。
有的考生选取的角度虽小,但过于标新立异,立论的角度很少有人涉足,或是需要较深的专业知识才能很好的论述,给申论写作制造了不必要的麻烦。
以征地主题为例
有考生提出的总论点是:征地问题产生的根源。
给定材料基本没有涉及征地问题产生根源的内容,而且这一论点涉及一些历史遗留问题,没有经过长时间的深入研究是很难有定论的,这样的角度就是太偏且太难的,没有抓住材料核心问题。因此提醒考生要注意,文章写作一定要选择自己能够把握的角度。
最后,还有一个很多人面临容易出现的问题。在文章写作当中通常会长篇大论,但是往往用语不够精炼和准确而且没有深度,也就直接导致文章的内容冗长毫无新意。这个从侧面反映了大家词汇量匮乏的问题。
因此,大家应在日常学习过程当中能够积累一些高大上的词汇。一般来讲大家需要积累一些政府工作当中经常的用的专业词汇以及一些政策词汇,另外一个方面大家需要积累一些申论词汇。所以希望大家把每年的政府工作报告好好的看一看,平时在看评论文章的过程当中积累一些专家和学者的用词和新鲜的观点。在做申论题目的过程当中学习和模仿申论语言的表达。
篇2:如何展开雅思写作大作文分论点










The higher living standard nowadays makes it possible for people to afford various consumer goods such as TV, microwave ovens, etc. When we enjoy the benefits brought by the modern technology, there is a wide concern that this development may have detrimental effects on the environment. For individual households, there is no doubt that using home appliances can increase people's quality of life. Watching TV is a relaxing way for people to spend their leisure time and broaden their scope of knowledge, with informative and amusing programs available on the screen any time. Electric appliances in the kitchen can assist housewives to cook tasty and nutritious food, making the tiring task more enjoyable and efficient. Also, the rise in consumption of home appliances can boost the manufacturing industry, which can bring the government more tax revenues and create more jobs. However, there are negative repercussions to this pattern of worldwide growth of electric products. The production and use of these goods consume huge quantities of fuels and raw materials and generate carbon emissions, contributing to the deterioration of the environment. Another problem is that manufacturers constantly launch new products and consumers replace the old ones, so tons of waste products and components are produced every day. Disposal of such items as fridges and air conditioners is particularly troublesome, because they contain dangerous chemicals and take up space in landfill sites. Overall, it is a positive trend that people can afford various kinds of electric products, which indicates that their living conditions have improved. However, some measures such as energy-saving and recycling technologies need to be adopted for protecting the environment. (270 words)
篇3:如何展开雅思写作大作文分论点
题目为:In many countries, more and more people can buy a wide range of household goods like television, microwave oven and rice cooker. Is it a positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your ,如电视,微波炉还有电饭煲。这是积极还是消极的发展吗?
相似写作话题(Similar Topic):
Nowadays, more and more people are having consumer goods like refrigerators and washing machines. Does this development bring more advantages than disadvantages? (/12/12)

仔细研究题目之后,你可以选择立场来回答问题。针对家庭电器,你立刻建立你的立场:利多弊少。
可以用如下结构:










引言开头household appliances: more positive than negative
主体A段 the advantages of household appliances (支持主题)
主体B段 the disadvantages of household appliances (支持主题)
结论结尾household appliances: more positive than negative (重申主题)
这是首次雅思考试。回答问题的方式很多,一般而考生赞成利大于弊。以下范文也是站在同样的立场。
篇4:如何展开雅思写作大作文分论点
重磅归来:20全年雅思写作范文大汇总,写作考情全揽

解析:本题为社会生活与科技的交叉话题。问题是人们购买大量家电是积极或者消极发展。对于论点的拓展,考生应该不会存在很大的困难;但是论述时一定要利用题目中告知的一些家电品项来具体论述其带来的生活品质提高的表现。
文章结构
paragraph 1 :结合时代背景引入话题且表明自己的观点。
paragraph 2: 论述网络购物的优点。(分为买家和卖家两个层面)
paragraph 3: 论述网络购物的缺点。(分为买家和实体商家两个层面)
paragraph 4: 总结上文论点,强调自己的观点以及如何避免缺点。
篇5:如何展开雅思写作大作文分论点
In a world of consumerism, home electrical and electronic appliances have become so integral to modern life that, in many ways, they are what distinguish today’s society from yesterday’s. Household goods like television, microwave oven and rice cooker make your life so much easierand more enjoyable, but there are some disadvantages. As a whole, this kind of household goods, when properly used, can bring you more benefits than drawbacks.
老雅注:第一段引入话题,提出观点,话分两头,但利大于弊。










Generally speaking, buying over a dozen household equipments intended for daily use may be beneficial to you at home, from cooking to entertainment. Your microwave oven, for instance, allows you to cook rapidly with the turn of a dial, and this convenience provides more options in your daily life than in the past. Likewise, your rice cooker can simplify the cooking process by reducing the number of steps between you and your meal at the table. Further, because your refrigerator preserves foods for days or even weeks past their natural expiration dates, you can keep enough foods stocked in your freezer for future cooking, thereby saving your time spent on shopping. Similar advantages also apply to washing machines, dish-washers, dryers, and vacuum cleaners and so on. Thus, the more free time you save due to having appliances, the more other things you are capable of doing at your will, including watching television in the comfort of home after a heavy day from work.
老雅注:第二段支持主题,一头说利。第一句话是topic sentence。后面用举例的方式说明各类家用电器能为你节约时间,而最后一句则是点题:节约出来的时间有什么用呢?你可以自由支配,包括看电视休息等。
However, the development of consumerism in many countries is not entirely positive; and there are drawbacks which are less obvious and yet they should not be overlooked. To begin with, it not only costs money to buy consumer equipments but also to operate them. Of course, cost is a disadvantage if you buy too many household gadgets and use them excessively in what is called the “throw-away” society. No doubt, the modern consumerism is likely to have an en environmental impact, either from the production processes or the disposal of the devices ranging from kitchen devices to television sets. Accordingly, without safe and efficient ways of recycling, electronic wastes (after being burned to salvage bits of metal) may release toxic substance into the atmosphere, polluting the immediate environment. That is to say, the dramatic increase in the number of household goods means the problem of greater carbon dioxide emissions, apart from the problem of rising energy demands and expenses that will need to be met.
老雅注:第三段说弊。第一句话是 topic sentence。先从花钱说起,然后讨论对环境的影响。
On balance, the development of having useful appliances at your home is more positive than negative. Despite some bad effects typical of modern consumerism, life has become so much more full of pleasure due to these devices available from the kitchen to the bedroom. Now, ask yourself if you would rather live in today’s society or yesterday’s.
老雅注:第四段重申主题,利大于弊,二合为一。结论后应引言。











1. “Household goods” 是题目中的关键字(keywords), 必须出现在文章里,才不会跑题。当然,为了词汇有适当的变换,可以采取同义的词汇来替代。如:household/home “appliances, devices, equipments, gadgets, etc.”
2. “Is this a positive or negative development. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.” 答问题,看两边,如此你才能取得比较平衡的论证。你虽然认为好处多,你也得提到也有坏处。单边论证,难以说服读者。
3. 作文的三个T。Thesis statement主题句;Topic sentence 指标句;Transitional devices (however, thus, accordingly, likewise, but, and, nevertheless, that is to say, on balance, etc.)
4. 遵循评分标准:全面答题 task response ,逻辑连贯cohesion and coherence ,辞汇资源 lexical resource ,文法正确grammatical range and accuracy。
篇6:如何展开雅思写作大作文分论点
In contemporary society, most families are capable to afford home appliances such as television, microwave, oven and so on. It is generally accepted that those technological goods have brought great convenience to our life although they do generate negative effects on environment.
In terms of merits of using domestic appliances, the most obvious is that people’s quality of life has been boosted. Take TV as an example; watching TV is a preferable means of relaxation for people to spend their leisure time and release stress, with amusing programs, entertainment news as well as soap operas shown on the screen. Another case is that the application of microwave, oven and rock cookers in the kitchen saves housewives from heavy housework and even assists them in cooking delicious meals efficiently. Furthermore, consumers’ demands for electric appliances stimulate the development of manufacturing industries, which creates more job opportunities and bring the government increasing tax revenue.
However, it must be admitted that the worldwide use of household appliances inevitably contributes to environmental degradation. To commence with, in an attempt to maintain these devices function, a great amount of electricity has to be consumed, which is largely generated from fossil fuels such as coal and petroleum. In the long run, the scarcity of natural resources will become a tough issue for human beings. In addition, harmful gas emission is another big concern. As a matter of fact, in the use of fridge and air conditions, Freon (a kind of chemical gas) is emitted into air, leading to the destruction of ozone layer.
In conclusion, as far as I am concerned, it is a positive development that people can purchase various electric appliances. However, environment-friendly technology should be adopted in its production to protect environment.










篇7:托福独立写作如何构思分论点
托福独立写作分论点要有逻辑性和合理性,要求我们在分论点排列顺序上要注意逻辑。一般说来,五段式托福独立写作的三个主体段,若都是同意或者都是反对的理由的话,可以有两种逻辑顺序:
1、按照“重要性”来排,将你认为最主要的理由放在第一个主体段中详细论证;
2、第二种是按照“小到 大”的原则,即个人方面的理由先写,然后再是家庭,公司,最后再是社会,国家等。
如果所有的分论点并没有主次之分,例如都是属于个人的论点,则这个时候要看这些分论点后续的论证内容的多少。有的说的放前面,素材多的放前面。
托福独立写作分论点写作注意事项
1、托福独立写作在审题,彻底把握题目主旨,方可进行段落布局。根据分论点的数量及论点的可延展性来敲定立场。
2、假如考生大致理清了分论点,主体段的布局基本就可以敲定大方向。采用五段式结构布局/用四段式结构布局进行写作就可以。
3、新东方在线提醒考生们,托福独立写作分论点在布局的时候要有一定的逻辑性和合理性。
4、分论点如果是平行关系,逻辑关系中一定要跟主题成因果关系,并且论点之间互相不重合。
托福独立写作分论点要想迅速、有效的找到并写出来,并不是件容易的事,在实际托福写作考试中要多多理清思路,练习写提纲的习惯。
篇8:托福独立写作如何构思分论点