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记叙文 Narration
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Everyone has an experience they would rather forget. Some are embarrassing, some are moving, and some teach us a lesson. Here is a story of mine.
Last Sunday I went fishing. After setting up my fishing rod(钓鱼竿) with bait(鱼饵), I sat down on the bank of the lake. But two hours later, I didn’t catch any fish. I got very angry and began to pack up my stuff(收拾东西), preparing to go back home.
Just then, I saw an old man sitting near me. To my surprise, his basket was full of fish, so I went over to him, wanting to know why. “Excuse me, but how long have you sat here?” I asked. “About four hours,” he answered. “Four hours?” I couldn’t believe my ears. “Yes. It’s very important to be patient,” the old man said. “ Don’t consider fishing a tiring sport. Just enjoy it.”
阅读下面短文,然后按要求写一篇约150字短文。
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Suddenly, I understand what he said. I must learn to be patient. Then I sat there and waited for fish patiently. I felt a fish touch the bait, but I didn’t move and waited for the right moment to reel it in(卷收钓鱼线). At last, I caught it. This made me very happy. In the following six hours, I caught over 10 fish.
On my way home, I thought what had happened on the bank. I gradually realized that the secret of success was patience.
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[写作内容]
1) 以约30个词概括短文要点;
2) 然后以约120个词写一篇记叙文,描写你结识到耐心主要性一次经历,并包括下列要点:
a) 叙述你结识到耐心主要性一次真实或虚构经历;(一定要有结果)
b)你是如何结识到耐心主要性;
c) 耐心对你生活、学习有什么影响。
[写作要求]
(1) 能够参考阅读材料篇章结构,组织故事,但不得直接引用原文中句子;
(2) 标题自定。
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读A narrative(记叙文).
写A narrative(记叙文).
写作模板
四部曲
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叙事类文章写作模板:
(题目)1分 有时不一定要求写标题
2. Summary (概要 约30-40个词) 5分
3. Body (正文) 19分
1) A transitional sentence (过渡句引出例子)
2) An example and so on
(举一个相同主题例子,再按题目要求谈感受或
发表见解等)
4. Ending (结尾点题)
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What should we pay attention to
when writing a title?
第一步. Title
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Suggestions:
What should we pay attention to
when writing a title?
We should use a noun phrase or a sentence as a title.
first letter of every word in a title should be written in a capital(大写) letter except articles(冠词), prepositions(介词) and conjunctions(连词).
3. The number of a title had better not be more than 10 words.
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[写作内容]
1) 以约30个词概括短文要点;
2) 然后以约120个词写一篇记叙文,描写你结识到耐心主要性一次经历,并包括下列要点:
a) 叙述你结识到耐心主要性一次真实或虚构经历;(一定要有结果)
b)你是如何结识到耐心主要性;
c) 耐心对你生活、学习有什么影响。
[写作要求]
(1) 能够参考阅读材料篇章结构,组织故事,但不得直接引用原文中句子;
(2) 标题自定。
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What’s the title that we should use?
Is Important.
2 The Important of Patience.
3 How Importance Patience Is.
4 Patience Is the Secret of Success.
5 The Key to Success ─ Patience
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