消防演习fire drill.ppt

文档介绍：2011惠州模拟题
假如你是小明,你们学校最近进行了一次消防演习,请就演习的情况在周五上午英语课前向全班做总结报告。报告内容如下:
1. 目的:培养师生在火灾发生时的自我保护能力和自救能力;
:本周一下午4点;
3. 参加人员:全体师生,约4,000人;
4. 演习过程:大家迅速,安全地在5分钟内到达操场指定位置;
5. 大家的感受。
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时态、人称、分段?
VS 题目信息顺序
改卷信息顺序= 题目信息顺序
考生信息顺序= ?
基础写作的解题策略
2. 考生自创式表达 VS 英语习惯表达
1) build up / train the teachers’ and students’ abilities of self-protecting and self-saving
$ improve / develop our teachers’ and students’ ability to protect and save ourselves
2) at 4 on the afternoon of this Monday
in 4 on this Monday afternoon
$ at 4 o’clock this Monday afternoon
at 4 o‘clock that afternoon (注意看首句)
3) arrive the pointed / directed position in the playground
$ arrive at / reach / get to the appointed / right position on the playground
3. 高级词汇VS 准确词汇
1) the destination of the fire drill was in order to …
… the aim / purpose of the fire drill was to …
2) …when a fire occurred /took place / burst out
$ when a fire broke out
3) attended the fire drill
$ took part in / participated in the fire drill
4) arrived at the right position swiftly/rapidly/at a high speed and safely
$ arrived at the right position quickly and safely
4. 复杂句型 VS 恰当句型
1) All of the teachers and students, the number of which was 4,000 in total, took an active part in the fire drill.
$ All of the teachers and students, about / approximately 4,000 in total, took an active part in the fire drill.
2) Quickly and safely did we all arrive at the right position on the playground within 5 minutes.
$ During the drill, we all arrived at the right position within 5 minutes quickly and safely.
3) There were about 4, 000 people participated in the fire drill.
$ All of the teachers and students, including
4, 000 of them, participated in the fire drill.
5. 感受/看法--- “温柔陷阱”
1) After the fire drill, some of us got pale, so it was useless.
After the fire drill, we were so excited that we shouted together happily.
How meaningful the fire drill was!
Some thought it a waste of time and others