文档介绍:四级作文写作策略
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:2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷1至2份。
,对照样卷评分,若认为与某一分数(如8分)相似,即定为该分数(即8分);若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数,则可加1分(即9分)或减1分(即7分)。但不得加或减半分。
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2分—条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。
5分—基本切题。表达思路不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。
8分—基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。
11分—切题。表达思路清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。
14分—切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。
用英文或中文给出提纲(outline),要求按提纲写作,这种提纲经常是以三段的形式给出,又称三段式作文
审题
Benefits of Sports
How university graduates find work
开门见山:单刀直入,直截了当。不要兜圈子,绕弯子,第一句话最好就采用“topic sentence”,点明主题,重点突出
根据中、英文提纲,选取素材
书写一定要工整,卷面力求整洁
“如今,人们普遍认为……但是我怀疑……”
Nowadays,it is monly believed that..., but I wonder that...
“近来,……的问题已经成为人们注目的焦点。”
Currently, the issue of ...has been brought to public attention.
“随着……的快速增长,……在日常生活中已经变得越来越重要。”
Along with the rapid growth of ..., ... has e increasingly important in our daily life.
文章结尾句型
“因此,不难得出结论……”
Accordingly/Consequently/As a result, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that...
“综上所述,我们能得出如下结论……”
From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that...
“这一难题,是任何人都不可能避免的。但只要处理得当,我们就会……”
The dilemma is something no one can avoid. Properly handled, however, we will...
“总之,全社会都应该密切关注……,只有这样我们才能……”
All in all, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of .... Only in this way can we....
“考虑到所有的因素,我们意识到……”
Taking into account all of these factors, we have reached the realization that...
1. individuals, characters, folks 替换 people, persons
2. positive, favorable, rosy (美好的), promising (有希望的), perfect, pleasurable, excellent, outstanding, superior替换 good。
3. dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的) 替换bad,如果bad做表语,可以用be less impressive替换。
.:An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation, as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.
4. an ocean of, a sea of, 替换many。
用many, if not most 时一定要小心,many后一定要有词。
例如:M