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Advertisements
Topic
Advantages
…help us in many aspects.
…benefit … a lot ./…be beneficial to …
keep sb. informed of;
have access to; be accessible to
expose sb. to sth. ,
help …compare …
have a better understanding of …
promote the sales of, sell well
educate sb. to do …/ teach sb. to do
However, there exist a lot of disadvantages.
mislead sb. / cheat sb. into /take in ..
interrupt sb./ bother sb.
do harm to . / be harmful to ,
increase the cost of …/ waste …doing …
Disadvantages
Your attitude / opinion:
far as I am concerned, …outweigh…
though…I still consider it…
all its…we must acknowledge…
believe we can…as long as…
…
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advantages / disadvantages
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As science and technology develops , we can see advertisements almost everywhere.
Advertisements help people get much information about new products. Company can sell more products than before. And some advertisements educate the public.
Advertisements have some bad effects on our daily life. It wastes a lot of natural resources ,which increases the cost of products. They mislead or even cheat consumers. They make us upset.
I think advertising is useful. If we have enough facts from ads, we can easily make a much better choice.
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As science and technology develops , we can see advertisements almost everywhere
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people are constantly exposed to ads…
People have access to …/are accessible to ads…
Advertising finds its way into / floods into our daily life….
With science and technology developing
With the development of science and technology ,
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1. It wastes a lot of natural resources, which increases the cost of products.
1) …increasing the cost of products.
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2 ) …causing / leading to / resulting in/ contribut