文档介绍：高分作文标志
1、是否长短句交叉;
2、用词是否恰当,准确,形象,尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;
3、关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词;
下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项:
,这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用 we / I (比如写
结尾时不用 we should pay attention to 而用 Attention should be paid to. )举个经典结
尾 It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the
service industry like that. Thus, petitive edge will be sharpened effectively.
,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词
或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
如 however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,
助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
比如说: Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …
3. 一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的代替太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现 good, bad , many,
thing, think,
people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中,applicable 代替 proper, approaches 代替 ways,
implement 代替 carry out, sharpen one’petitive edge 代替 enhance one’s
competitiveness(提高某物竞争力)
下面举一篇例子,给各位钻石班会员共勉!
Computer and I By Simmy
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me puter
as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged
myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of
melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world
belonged to me.
exceedingly 替换 very
thrilling 替换 exciting
2011 考研钻石包过班英语笔记整理 日 qq115920178
sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth.