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名师破解 2013 高考英语考试写作常见问题( 5)
摘要:名师破解 2013 高考英语考试写作常见问题
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2000 年高考书面表达
假设你是李华,在美国探亲。2000 年 2 月 8 日清晨,你目击一起交通事故。警察居让你写一份材料,报
告当时所见情况。请根据下列图画写出报告。
注意:
1. 目击者应该准确报告事实;
2. 词数 100 左右;
3. 结尾已为你写好。
About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.
Li Hua
一、评分原则
1. 本题总分为 30 分,其中内容和语言占 29 分,词数占 1 分。按 7 个档次给分。
2. 评分时,现根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调
整档次,最后给分。词数在 90-110 之间的,加 1 分。
二、内容要点
1. 时间:2000 年 2 月 8 日早晨 7 点 15 分;
2. 地点:公园路公园门前;
3. 我正沿公路向东走;
4. 一辆汽车从第 3 街向右拐,驶入公园路时撞倒了一位过街的老人;
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5. 汽车未停,沿公园路向西开走;
6. 汽车是黄色的,车牌号是 AC864,司机是一位女性。
三、说明
1. 内容要点可用不同方式表达。
2. 对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。
四、 One possible version
It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000. I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an
elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and
make a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the man while he was crossing the road. He fell
with a cry. The car didn’t stop but drove off at great speed heading west. I noticed the driver was a young woman
and the plate number was AC864. About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the
nearest hospital.
Li Hua
实际满分作文
At 7:15 on the morning of , I was footing eastward along