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Dear leaders, distinguished guests, ladies and gentlemen: Today, for Zhaoyang is a happy day, Zhaoyang group is 10 years old now.
You (who )attend celebration activities ①are our chief
executive XX、general manager XX and the other leaders、retired employees and in-service staffs. In this, I, on behalf of Zhaoyang group staff, express our heartfelt thanks to you②.
Then in this special day ,I want to tell you the history of pany.
At beginning, Zhaoyang only was a small store, owning only a team about tens of staff, and a room rent, which was only 10 square meters. Up to the present, the Science Research Production and Management Base’s foundation, is located on Gaoxin Road 3③. with its developments, Every block is filled with our labor④. It suggests that pany entering into a new starting point. Today, Zhaoyang has been developing a Hi-tech enterprise, which is established in realizing diversified development requirement gradually, but based on the equipment production, sell, project installation and technology service, and enter into aerodynamic and LED potted application industry. By far, we has 这部分应该是定语,“who”好像可以省略
改动:删express前的“to”成句子
③改动:改成现在时,“locate”好像要被动;应该是”road 3”吧?“3 road”太别扭了! ④“between”改为“with”①②
owned five items Zhaoyang Brand patent, and has been elected Famous Private Management Enterprise by Industrial mercial Bureau of Suzhou government. Ever