文档介绍：KET便条写作真题解析
题目:Last night you were at a friend’s house. You think you left something important there. Write a note to your friend.
Say:
What you have left
Why it is important
Where in the house you think
Write 25-35 words.
Write the note on your answer sheet.
例文一: 5分档(满分5分)
Dear friend:
I have left at your house my coat. It is very important because it was a present from my mother. I think I left the coat in your hall.
Love ,Marie
点评: 时态人称正确。虽然有个别小错误: 如 I have left at your house my coat.(I have left my coat at your house.),但整篇文章能清楚传达所有三个信息。
例文二:3分档
Dear friend,
I liked so much visit you house last night but I think I left something important there. What I have losting is me book. It is very important because I think I leave it there. I think I leaft it in your room.
点评:有明显时态、人称错误。虽然能试图传达所有三个信息,但需要读者对其语言表达进行解释。而且结尾没有落款。
例文三:1分档
Dear my friend,
I have very lovely time be at your houses. I really like it. I really like to eat dinner with your family. How are you? I think my money is in your house I think? e my home with my money as soon as now. Jane
点评:只回答了一个问题,语法错误较多,错误使用了一般现在时