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学生真实范文:
Dear President:
I’m liming. I’m a student in Grade Three.
Today, I’m writing to you a letter, my dear, dear president. Our college has ten campuses,( but the same food in different campus) the food same, the price no same. The price is so black. Please tell me why different. The word on the menu too small to read. So we ask cooker what we eat today. At last, I love my university, I love you too. So I write you this letter.
No response, I’ll write again and again.
对比范文
Dear ,
My name is Liming, a junior from the Chemical Science School. I’m writing to talk about the canteen service on campus.
I am sorry to tell you that there are many problems in our school. Firstly, the quality of our food in our school is very bad, while the price is very high. As a result, many students prefer to have a food out of school. Secondly, good as the service of our canteen is, the environment of our canteen is very bad. Many students threw about food and rubbish everywhere the wanted. It is very disgusting for us to dine in such environment. Thirdly, our canteen is too small to provide us with enough seats. So every day we spent much time in waiting to be served, which is a waste of time for us.
Therefore, I think we should take some measures to deal with the problems. First, we should try our best to improve the quality of the food. Second, we should take measures to make the price medium. Last, we should send some students to make sure that our canteen is clean.
I am sure our canteen will e better with our efforts. I am looking forward to seeing the change of our canteen.
Yours,
Li Ming
投诉信: express/air dissatisfaction/disappointment/concern regarding/concerning/as regards the canteen/library/bookstore
正文:第二段
改写提纲一:2句
改写提纲二:2句
改写提纲三:2句
第三段:2句
表示感谢:My appreciation to you for your generous help is beyond words; Words fail me when i wish to express my sincere gratitude to yo