文档介绍：PEP小学英语六年级上册各单元作文范例及点评
Li Ying ’S Hobby
    Li Ying likes English very much. She works hard at it. She reads English every morning. She likes speaking English. She often listens to the radio. She watches TV only on Saturday evening.
    Does she like dancing? No, she doesn’t. But she likes drawing and singing. Her parents love her. And all the teachers and her friends like her, too. She says her hobbies make her happy.
 
【要领点评】
    这一篇写爱好的文章,小作者的写作思路很值得我们学习,他没有具体写到刘莹的某一种爱好,而是从学习到课余的多种爱好入手,“爱好”这个角度来看刘莹的话,我们会觉得这个形象很饱满。
    小朋友们写这种“叙事写人”作文时,可以从两个角度下手:一是具体地描绘;二是和上面小朋友一样,粗线条地勾画,二者各有所长,另处在行文中使用一些问句,使用一些转述的话,可以使作文更有灵气,避免了平铺直叙的缺点。比如上文的“Does she like dancing? No, she doesn’t.”和“she says her hobbies make her happy.”就是十分不错的句子,使读者眼前为之一亮。
 
Don’t be against the traffic rules
    I go to school from Monday to Friday .I go to school by bike at 7:30 in the morning .I must cross two busy roads .If the traffic light is red or yellow,I know I can’t cross the road ,so I wait.
    If the light turns green, I know it means “Go”, and then I walk across the road .I always ride on the right side of the road .I am never against the traffic rules.
 
【要领点评】
    这篇作文的题目是“不要违反交通规则”,小作者没有说一些空话,而是从自己的经历写起,叙述自己以什么方式去上学,在上学的路上是怎么做的,很形象。
    小朋友们在作文时注意不要图大,那样很容易使文章显得空洞,而要写自己身边熟悉的事情。要注意行文中字母的大小写、句子的标点符号等。
 
I Love My Family
    Here is a photo lf my family. These are four peop