文档介绍：英语书面表达训练
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书面表达:
是中考英语中的必考题,约占卷面总分的12%,分值约为15 分。
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中考英语作文评分标准
一档13-15分包含所有要点,应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇, 用
词准确、语法正确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚,具有较强的
语言运用能力。
二档10-12 分基本包含所有要点,应用了较丰富的语言结构和词
汇,句子较通顺,表达较清楚,但有少量错误。
三档7-9分内容包含了多数要点,语言表达过于简单,句子不够通
顺,有部分语言错误,基本上不影响总体理解。
四档4-6分只包含了少数要点,语言不规范,句子无条理,行文不
连贯,语言错误严重,影响理解。
五档0-3分只写出与要求的内容相关的一些信息词语,语言错误多。
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大病指:
句子结构、谓语构成、词序、
语态、时态等方面;
小病指:
名词单复数、第三人称单数、
拼写、标点符号、大小写方面。
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Alice is my a best friend, e from
Canada. she is very tall, hair is very long,he
like sports. but I don‘t know if does she like
swim? She likes chinese,and she do well in
it,we all very like she.
去掉
comes
She
her
she
likes
去掉
likes
swimming
Chinese
does
去掉
her
very much
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、结构--- 避免出现Chinglish 现象。
We all very like her.
We all like her very much.√
He by bike to school.
He goes to school by bike. √
避免方法:
多记短语和句型
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3 注意语法项目
人称一致:
Alice is my best friend, he likes sports.
时态:
He has gone to Guilin yesterday.
主谓一致:
This pair of shoes are mine.
The shoes are new.<br****惯用法:
He helps me in my English.
《》、
×
√
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4. 注意语序(感叹句,疑问句,宾语从句,倒装句)
I don‘t know if does she like swimming。
she likes swimming
What a nice student is she!
she is!
She is a student, so I am.
so am I
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5、注意:重短轻长, 就易避难。
以写正确、通顺为最基本要求。
2. Mr Tang is the teacher that I
like best.
Mr Tang is a teacher, I like him best.
have a friend is called Li Ming.
去掉
I have a friend,he is called Li Ming.
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Let’s practice! 常见错误改正:
likes action films very much.
are at school from Monday to Friday.
my family like dogs.
4. We go to Dalian by boat.
can’t learn everything at school.
are ma