文档介绍：高分作文标志
1:高考100词左右;四级120-150字;
六级150—180字;
2、是否长短句交叉;
3、用词是否恰当,准确,形象,尽量
使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;
4、关键词是否换用,切勿老用重复词;
写好一篇作文的注意事项
,这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. )举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段:It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus, petitive edge will be sharpened effectively.
,比如说把副词、连接词等,作插入语放在中间,一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。 
如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间,一般放在动词,助动词后,两边分别加上逗号。
比如说: Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …
3. 一定要学会换词,换形象,具体的代替太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think,
people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中,applicable代替proper, approaches代替ways, implement代替carry out, sharpen one’petitive edge代替enhance one’petitiveness(提高某物竞争力)
Computer and I By Simmy
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me puter as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
very
exciting
sb. be interested in sth.
search
a lot of
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing
popularity puters. Coincident with the advancement
of science and technology, computers pouring into the
current society as a fashion are appealing to growing
individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been
submerged by them, in large measure!
more and more popular
“与…一致With …
development
( flood into / swarm into )替换 enter into
now
sb. be interested in sth.
more and more people
The dawn of the new century witnessed 精彩句型,用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情;
It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型说某事是毫不夸张的
For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Addi