文档介绍：How can we write a goode
composition?
o .Joy Tong
High school is a
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High school is
2
n ones life
th great f
memories. On
the school, my school friends and I work (campus)my school friends and I work hard
hard and play hard together. I'll never and play hard together. Never will I forget.
forget those days. +t that time we <those days when we enjoyed ourselves in a
enjoyed ourselves in all kinds of variety of activities, such as the sports
activities, such as the sports meeting, meeting, Science Week and Art Festival
Science Week and Art Festival. +t the Meanwhile, we have developedour
same time, we havre developed our abilities and (harvested)valuable
friendships. friendships. More impe
tantly,Iam lucky to have to have met many lovely teachers, who
y not only
teach me how to study, but also how to how to be a good person in society. As a
be a good person in society. As a student student of Senior 3, it won't
of Senior 3, I will graduate soon. I d like before I graduate. Ial like to(express my)
to thank my teachers and parents. They Cattitude to my teachers and parents with
help me grow up. I benefited a lot and (whose help)I have grown up, benefited a
made great progress in every wa
lot and made great progress in every way
three stages
Stage
Subject& structure审题谋篇
Stage 2
details
增加细节
Stage 3
polishing
润色习作
第二节书面表达(满分25分)
假定你是李华,你校影俱乐部( photography club)将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友
Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括
:环境保护
: intlphotoshow@ gmschool,com
注意
semi-open composition
,以使行文连
2015书面表达(满分25
假如你是李华,计划和同学去敬老院( nursing home)陪老人们过重阳节( the double ninth
Festⅳva)。请绐外教露西写封邮件,邀她一同前往,内容包括
出发及返回时间
2活动:包饺子、表演节目等。
注意:
1词数100左右
,以使行文连贯;
假如你是李华,收到美国表妹Andy的电子邮件,提及
她父母想看她的微信朋友圈( Wechat moments),她对
是否应与他们分享感到犹豫。请给她回信,要点如下
观点(赞成或反对);
subject
由
s提出建议
注意:
,以使行文连贯。
审题谋篇
审题
定体裁要点类应用文一—建议信
定人称第一、第二人称为主
第三人称为辅
定时态
般现在时和一般将来时为主
Ilook
审题谋篇