文档介绍：Unit b Art world
Task
Learning Aims
By the end of class, we students are expected to
Find out highlights and problems in our own writing as well as
our peers while fulfilling some tasks
focus on writing problems of contents and languages, such as
the lack of details about ideas, poor word choices and boring
sentences, etc
3. improve our oral and written ability in evaluating(iF fti)and
improving both our pieces and others', especially editing our
own first drafts
What problems of writing will be mainly solved?
like art best
Both my teachers and classmates think I am able to sing
ll because I have a gift for singing
began to learn my first song Twinkle, twinkle, little star'when
I was six years old. At that time I found that singing was such
an interesting thing, up to now, I have learned over two
hundred songs
In my spare time, I often sing songs to others. Everyone is
happy to be my listeners, because of my passion and
confidence. Even though I cannot be a professional singer,
still get a lot of fun from singing. Because of singing, my life
becomes more colourful
Let's review if the piece is finished well enough
一查作品完成度
Does the writer manage to tell readers
what art form he likes best?
whether he is good at this art from?
when he became interested in this art form?
whether he has any stories about this art form?
How important this art from is to him?
Adapted from the questionnaire in the text book
Let's check if the writer finishes the writing task
Characteristics of good writing
Good organization
Good
writing
Fine language
Enough contents
I like art best
Both my teachers and classmates think I am able to sing
well because I have a gift for singing
began to learn my first song ' Twinkle, twinkle, little star
Then I was six years old. At that time I found that singing
as such an interesting thing, up to now, I have learned
over two hundred songs
In my spare time, I often sing songs to oth