文档介绍：The beauty of writing
“Reading makes a full man;
conference a ready man;
and writing an ______man.”
--Francis Bacon
exact
阅读使人充实，交谈使人机智，写作使人精确。
--培根
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阅卷老师喜欢的句子
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同位语结构、with复合结构，使文章简洁、通顺；尽量使用动词短语和词组、定语从句等复合句，修辞润色文章。
使用分词短语(非谓语动词）
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Non- finite Verbs
in writing
非谓语动词在写作中的应用
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1. Seeing from the top of mountain, the
city is beautiful .

2. In my opinion, climb mountain is an
enjoyable thing.

3. —Which team is good at cooking?
—A team called itself the supper cook.
Correction
写作中非谓语动词常见的错误
Seen
climbing
calling
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1. When she heard the news, she burst into crying.
_________ the news, she burst into crying.
2. Australia is located on the west coast of the Pacific. Australia is the largest country in Oceania.
Australia， ________ __________ the west
coast of the Pacific， is the largest country in
Oceania.
用非谓语结构改写句子
Hearing
located on
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3. Though I admit what he has said, I still doubt he didn’t do his best.
__________ ________ ________ _______
_________, I still doubt he didn’t do his best.
4. Because I missed the bus, I went to school
late.
________ ________ __________, I went to school late.
Admitting what he has
said
Missing the bus
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I was walking in the street , I saw him.
_____________ in the street , I saw him.
you work hard,
________________hard , you will succeed.
Walking
Working
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he had failed many times , he didn’t lose heart.
________________many times , he didn’t lose heart.
she was scolded by the teacher, the girl sat there without lifting her head.
_____________________ ,the girl sat there without lifting her head.
Having failed
Scolded by the teacher
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例文(1)：
Getting back what you have lost would be an unforgettable experience. Last Monday, I lost my expensive