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初三作文之初中英语作文评语集
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a good beginning.
a perfect ending.
well-organized. perfectly-expanded.
the first para. makes a good beginning.
the last para. makes a perfect ending.
all the points have been covered.
it’s clever of you to use a topic sentence at the beginning of a para. it’s wonderful to use proper conjunctions between sentences.
you are good at developing para.
you have made great progress in developing passage.
i am glad to see the sentence conherence in your last para.
better pay more attention to the relationship between sentences. it’s really wonderful to start/end your sentences with adverbials.
在起始年级应侧重对学生写作行为规范的引领，重在对学生进行词语方面的引导；对高年级学生则应侧重对文章的结构、行文的逻辑、句子的变化等方面的指点和引导。
虽然这些评语对我们大部分学生来说不太适合，以为他们连老师评他们什么都看不懂，但我们平时对作文的批改确实没做到这么仔细，有很大启发。
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【篇二：初中英文评语模板】
wang junjie
you have made some progress in your english this term. working hard in the main subjects makes you get more successful than before.
liu jiahao
you are a lovely and innocent boy。although you are so active in class，your grade is just so-so。you are enthusiastic，getting along well with classmates，but you love fun and games，that effects your study。if you can deal with study and play well，you will be a great boy。
bill
you have made progress in english. word harder and i believe you mill be good at english.
jay
you are good at chinese. i appreciate your chinese passages. though you have little english foundation, you show great interest in learning english. you need to keep trying your best.
james
your english is not very good, but i think if you work hard, you’ll mode much progress in english. believe in yourself. i believe your english will be good if you work hard and come to ask me for help if you need.
jook
your work is quite good except for a few spelling mistakes. try to spell you r words correctly. avoid misspelling!
qing