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文档介绍:Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The Moonlight Clan. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1) 现在很多年轻人每个月都把自己赚的钱花光,他们被称作"月光族”
2) 有人认为这是一种时尚的消费观念,但很多人反对这样消费
3) 我对此的看法是……
The Moonlight Clan
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本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象,提纲第2点针对该现象提出两种 不同的观点,提纲第3点要求谈谈''我”的看法,由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。
根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:描述“月光族”现象,引出对这一现象的不同看 法;对比阐述两种看法各自的理由;表明“我”对“月光族”的看法并说明理由。
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The Moonlight Clan
Nowadays, more and more people, [l]especially the young are joining in the army of “the moonlight clan" . These people exhaust their earnings every month without any savings, [2]Many people think this is a fashionable life style, [2]while more other people object to this kind of consumption style.
Those who support "the moonlight clan" think that those people know how to enjoy life and have a higher life quality. [3]However, more other people criticize “the moonlight clan”. They say that the consumption habit of “the moonlight clan" is unhealthy and sometimes wasteful. In addition, no savings will [4]place "the moonlight clan" in a difficult position [5]in case of unexpected expenses.
Weighing these two arguments, I prefer to the latter one. In my eyes, [7]though “the moonlight clan" may acquire temporary satisfaction from their consumption, [8]in the long term, it [9]is unfavorable to their family and career. [10]Just as a proverb says, one should always prepare for a rainy day.
佳句临摩
佳句: Many people think this is a fashionable life style, while more other people object to this kind of consumption style.
临摩:勇敢的人往往会获得更多的机会,而懦弱的人面对机会也有可能错过。
佳句:Those who support "the moonlight clan” think that those people know how to enjoy life and have a higher life quality.
临摩:持悲观态度的那些人认为地球上有限的能源很快就会枯竭。
佳句:Just as a proverb says, o
,one should always prepare for a rainy day.
临摩:正如一句谚语所说的,“机会只给那些有准备的人。”
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composit