文档介绍：一、投稿信
1。 Dear Dr . Defendi ML:
I am sending a manuscript entitled “”by –which I should
like to submit fo study and the findings are of
considerable interest 。 A few minor revision are list below 。
2。 This is a well — written paper containing interesting
results which merit publication. For the benefit of the
reader ， however ， a number of points need clarifying and
certain statements require further justification 。 There are
given below.
Although these observation are interesting, they are rather limited and do not advance our knowledge of the subject sufficiently to warrant publication in PNAS. We suggest that the authors try submitting their findings to
specialist journal such as –
4。 Although this paper is good, it would be ever better if some extra data were added 。
This manuscript is not suitable for publication in the journal of –because the main observation it describe was reported 3 years ago in a reputable journal of - .
。 Please ask someone familiar with English language to help you rewrite this paper 。 As you will see, I have made
some correction at the beginning of the paper where some syntax is not satisfactory 。
7。 We feel that this potentially interesting study has been
marred by an inability to communicate the finding correctly
in English and should like to suggest tha