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1、2008年考研英语写作真题
Directions:
Write an essay of 160~200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and then
give ments.
From the surface e to see典型的中式英语“从表面来看”,读不通。不如简单点写成From the picture we can see
: two people helped我们在漫画描述段采用一般现在时态,所以这里应用help
each other towards the place where they want to are their cane behind ,应为They throw their crutches behind themselves.
You a leg, i have a leg, you and me together for example, your legs and my bine two legs, means only the gentlemen in the collaboration, and only mutual help, we can go forward.(此段仍属描述段,应放篇首)
I think that cooperation and trust in today's society is (who offer )only 删除
mutual trust, 这里是两个短语的并列用and
mutual help during tough time will go faster, go young people should sharpen your own, even if they encounter difficulties and setbacks, don't be afraid to face with courage, as long as the mutual help, they can tide over difficulties together
(无总结段?)
点评:你的这篇文章从语法和句式上来看,不存在太大的问题,证明你的英语基础不错。但就考研英语写作来说,你需要改进的地方还很多。
首先是你文章的结构问题。写作指导(Di