文档介绍：雅思写作提分5点要求
雅思写作提分五点要求
雅思写作提分要求1：审题最重要，紧抓题目中心论点，观点显明，论据充分。
通常来说，考生在进行雅思作文写作中。除了要抓住题目核心之外，就是要对考生写的话题要有显明的观点和充分uation,谓语动词是was,不能强调须要表达的重点概念，可以改为下面这句话：
My grandfather couldn't study engineering because his father needed help on the farm.
，避开频繁运用“there be”结构。
例如：There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for my grandfather.
可以改为：
My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day.
更简洁的句式为：
My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily.
，把从句改为短语或单词。
例如：Dairy cows were raised on the farm, which was located100 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an area that was remote.
简洁的表达方式为：
The dairy farm was located in a remote area, 100 kilometers to the nearest university.
，仅在须要强调宾语而不是主语的时候，才运用被动语态。
例如：In the fall, not only did the cows have to be milked, but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfather's family.
本句不够简洁的缘由是本句的重心应当是“劳碌的家庭-my grandfather's family”.
而运用了被动语态后，仿佛重心变成了cows和hay,下面的表达方式是主动语态，相对来说更简洁一些：
In the fall, my grandfather's family not only milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay.
雅思写作Task2社会类考官范文
Trade and travel would be a lot easier with a single, global currency that we all use.
Do you agree or disagree