文档介绍：如何提高书面表达句子的档次
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你的英国朋友正在做一个课题;世界各地的生日庆祝方式。他请你介绍中国学生过生日的方式。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文:
一、通常方式
二、我认为更有意义的庆祝方式和理由
*词数100-120 (2005 浙江卷)
Now students in China celebrate their birthdays in many ways.
Usually, a party is held. Best friends and relatives e to the party. They usually buy a gift. They show their best wishes. Sometimes, people send short messages too and it is ing very popular.
But I think that it’s better to help other people. We know that it’s important to learn to help other people. Helping other people can do us a lot of good. People will help you because you’ve helped them and you’ll be happy…
学生作品(1)
Nowadays students in China celebrate their birthdays in various ways.
Usually, a party is held so that people can get together. Best friends, as well as relatives, are going to be invited. It’s polite to buy a small gift which stands for one’s best wishes. What’s more, sending short messages on one’s birthday is ing more and more popular, as a result of its convenience.
However, as far as I’m concerned, it’s more meaningful to care about others than about oneself. As is known to all, to give is better than to receive. Birthdays mean not only being older but more helpful and useful to the world. Therefore, it’s of importance to learn to help others. Helping others on one’s birthday can do you a lot of good. For one thing, people will help you in return in the future; for another, you’ll be happy.
As a result, I think it better to help others to spend one’s birthday.
学生作品(2)
1. 要点齐全
2. 较多的语法结构和高级词汇
3. 全文结构紧凑
高档书面表达的要求:
1. 时间:昨天下午放学后
请根据下述情况写一篇80-120个单词的英语新闻
广播稿,准备在你校广播台播出。
2. 地点:回家路上
3. 人物:高一(2)班两名男生田力和段凯
4. 事件:边骑车边谈笑,后追逐一辆公交车,觉得好
玩。公交车遇红灯停下,两人来不及刹车,摔倒在
地。一人左手臂摔断,一人腿部受伤。
5. 警示:严格遵守交通规则,切忌在马路上嬉笑玩耍。
There was an accident happened to two students
in our school yesterday afternoon. (典型病句)
There was an accident that happened to two
students in our school yesterday afternoon.
(定语从句)
An accident occurred to two students