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为什么总是5分
从5到6
7分以上
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Lastly, providing these knowledge and sills could benefit our country which usually gives a financial support to universities. Having these knowledge and skills, students are more easy to get a job, and this can make our countries’ economy strong.
In conclusion, it can be said that providing the knowledge and skills which the workplace needs is every universities’ basic function. (232 words)
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The examiner’s comment:
SCORE: 5
This answer is less than 250 words and it does not address all parts of the question, so it loses marks.
II. 还原雅思考官评分过程
The examiner’s comment:
SCORE: 5
This answer is less than 250 words and it does not address all parts of the question, so it loses marks.
参考:
p144
The examiner’s comment:
Nevertheless, some relevant ideas and a position on the issue are presented. Ideas are organized and the structure of the answer is clearly signalled. There is some good use of linkers but there is also a lot of repetition due to inadequate use of referencing and substitution.
The examiner’s comment:
The high level of repetition [‘knowledge and skills’ is repeated nine times] also indicates limitations in range of vocabulary although, apart from language given in the rubric, there is just sufficient additional vocabulary for the task.
The answer includes attempts at complex sentence forms, but these are generally awkwardly phrased and tend to require some re-reading to understand. Nevertheless, there are examples of accurate complex structures.
(5++5+)/ 4 = ≈
– = 5
III. 从5到6
What knowledge and skills should universities provide has been argued for many years. Some people think that the true function of universities provide knowledge for their own purpose, but nowadays, more and more people point out that universit