文档介绍：08高考英语满分作文
全国卷I：满分范文一
满分文（一）
Dear Peter,
I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.
nd to improve m drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swimming pool is open for free the whol e day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable.
So come to enjoy yourself!
Welcome to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.
名师点评：
本文开门见山，首先点明了主旨。本文最大的特点是应用了很多比较复杂的句式，使文 章比较出彩。开头使用了独立结构交代宾馆位置。which引导的非限制性定语从句的使用也 很正确。总地来说，文章句式精炼，是篇不错的满分作文。
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好词 1. provide 2. convenience
好句 All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyab le.
所有这些服务都会给你带来便利，并且非常的愉快。
好处：bring great convenience,带来便利。
满分文（二）
Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel!
Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.
The hotel is located 500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, a v kinds of rooms for s
ter bath is provided as well. We serve both Chinses and western food in the restaur ant as well as coffee and tea in the cafe. All are provided in a short time. The swi mming pool, which is open for the whole day, is free for you to come.
We accept booking rooms ahead of time. So come and enjoy!
名师点评：
本文叙述比较详细，使用了比较复杂的句式和短语。首句的伴随状语用得很好。在介绍 房间类型时，作者使用了简短的对比句式，很精炼。作者还使用了定语从句which,同时在 描述酒店的两种价格的时候也很恰当，语句生动而不重复。
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好词 观光旅游2. book ；预订
好句 1. The hotel is located 500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mount
距离白山入口处500米的地方，这对于参观白山来说是一个很方便的位置。
好处：伴随状语的使用很到位。
2. The swimming pool, which is open for the whole day, is free for you to com e.
游泳池全天免费开放。
好处：which引导了非限制性定语从句。
北京卷：满分范文一
【满分范文】
第一节情景作文
满分文（一）
Dear Harry,
How are things going?
Last Monday, my class held the monitor election, a fierce competition between t wo students really. First, the two candidates, Liu Dong and Wang Hong, gave their election speeches respectively. Then other students wrote a name of the candidate on paper and put it into a box. The teacher counted the number of pieces of paper voting for the two candidates fairly. Finally, Wang H