文档介绍：语法,改错突破 Checklist :数;可数性 :形式/级 10. As/like 结构 11. 定语从句的关系词 12. 前后照应 c. 指代一致 d. 修辞一致 13. 逻辑关系: 连词/连接性副词反义词其它 1 缺词/多词?缺漏及赘述错误主要表现为漏掉介词、代词、关系词、冠词、连词等或重复意义相同或相近的词语以及出现两个主语等。?单数可数名词一般前应有冠词,但有些固定搭配中不用冠词? Dishwashers and washing machines do jobs that were once done by the hand. ? by (the) hand ? by hand 1 缺词/多词?不及物动词作谓语的关系代词前的介词? I suddenly realized that my own parents are the ones whom I can rely. ?(on) whom ?不及物动词后接宾语应添加介词? But perhaps we should look at both sides of the coin before arriving hasty conclusions. ? This leads changes in the way of life. ? arriving (at) / leads (to) ?固定搭配中是否缺介词,注意隔离修饰? In every home a stereo or television will fill the rooms sound. ? fill the rooms (with) sound ?短语中是否漏词?句子结构是否完整? In the eenth century, farm work and life were not much changed from that they had been in the old days. ? That ? what (原从句缺少宾语) ?定语从句中是否多了主语和宾语 More examples ? We have to make clear to each worker that everybody must observe these rules . ? make ? make it ?宾语为动词不定式或从句时,必须在动词与宾语补足语之间加上形式宾语 it。? Though we have known great deal about space , we still have a lot to learn. ? great deal ? a great deal ( 修饰不可数名词) ? The songs sounded via radios in restaurants , from cars passing on the highways and shoeshine( 擦皮鞋) parlors . ?? and (in) shoeshine parlors ?此处应是与前面词组 in restaurants 和 from cars 并列的介词短语? Both natural and synthetic man-made rubber are of little value in their raw state . ??去掉 synthetic 或 man-made ? Monsoon winds (季风), sometimes masked by other features of the general atmospheric circulation , they are associated with nearly all large continental land masses . ??去掉 they 同 Monsoon winds 重复 2 名词