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曹青& 李乔
BBS
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College Students
BBS and College Students
Nowadays, with the popularization puters among college students, BBS has e indispensable part of their life.
BBS is the abbreviation of bulletin board system. Its main function is to enable people municate on “boards”. Each authorized person can post articles on boards, or just reply other people’s posts. Students can discuss all kinds of topics on it, serious or easy. It can keep the students well-informed of the current events happening both in the world and on campus. What’s more, they can not only discuss and exchange opinions through BBS, but also make friends, sell and buy second-hand products. It serves as a splendid.
information center for college students.
However, just as the saying goes: No garden without weeds. Not to mention the garden of BBS. It is not immune to some illegal and nasty information. For example, you always can see advertisements about looking for a substitute examinee on BBS. Besides, some students have spent so much time on posting on BBS that they even forgot eating and sleeping, which results in many adverse consequences.
Anyhow, BBS indeed provides fertile soil for critical thinking, and encourages free speech of college students. Therefore, we should work together to make BBS a better place munication.
Main Points of the Article
题目分析: 观点论证型+校园话题+提纲作文
写作思路:本文围绕大学生使用BBS的情况展开论述。此类作文通常要在第一段指出当今社会的某种现象或者事物,并用简洁的话加以描述;第二段要求详述该现象或事物的特点或产生的原因,可以运用举例方法;结尾要表明自己的观点。
高分精点:
(1)紧扣提纲,重点阐述(第二、三段),观点鲜明;
(2)遣词造句富于变化;
(3)写作方法多样,如举例、引用、比喻。
Main Points of the Article
高分词句:与本文开头类似的句式还有:With the rapid improvement in…/ growing awareness of…, more and more…等。
短语 be immune to…“不受…影响”用在上下文中很形象。
谚语的引用:No garden without weeds. (没有不长草的园子)。
比喻的妙用:fertile soil 和前文的谚语相对应,增加了文章可读性。
plicated Words
BBS (Bulletin Board System) 电子公告板
Popularization
Indispensable , 绝对必要的
abbreviation , 缩写词
authorized
splendid , 辉煌的, 极好的
plicated Words
no garden without we