文档介绍:PERSONAL STATEMENT
by Zhao Haihong
On African grasslands, every morning the first thing a panther thinks of is "Today, anyway I should run faster than the slowest antelope". Meanwhile, what an antelope is thinking about is "Anyway I should run faster than the fastest panther". However, regardless of a panther or an antelope, the first thing is to RUN.(用这种方法开头不太好,这个比喻的确给人形象化的感觉,但是并不适合statement的写作,因为它没有传达关于作者个人的信息。Personal statement的目的不是表现你的文学天赋,而是使录取官员相信你有资格获准进一步学习,因此内容比形式更重要。)
In 1990, having essfully passed the petitive examination, as an "Honor Student" at provincial level, I was admitted by Dept. of Management of Northern University ranking first in our county. This is a milestone in my life, because I headed for maturity in real meaning. Clearly aware of importance of a solid fundamental, I studied industriously. What diligence rewarded me was overall GPA , ranking fifth in our department, and major GPA . Meanwhile, I was granted "Excellent Studying Prize" in 1991 and "Outstanding Undergraduate Student Scholarship" of Dept. of Management in 1992,1993.
Campus life is so plentiful that I can not miss such s golden chance to enrich myself. As a freshman, I affiliated Propaganda Dept. of Student Union of Northern University. Because of outstanding work, I was awarded "Excellent Promulgator of college" in 1991,1992. From 1991 to 1993, I also assumed the Director of th