文档介绍：托福作文范文(二)
下面给出按各评分标准的范文,仅供参考。
范文三(4分)
After a foreign student has decided e to the United States to study English, he must think about where (where he) is going to live and with whom. I believe that he should live with (an) American family if he can becuase (because) they can give him the support (that) he needs. They can help him improve his English, too.
To begin with, the foreigner who inhabits (lives) with an American family can rely on them for suprot (support) as he adjusts to plete (completely) new way of life. Suppose that (This is especially helpful if) he es homesick.
Another advantage to living with an American family is (that) the student can improve his English quick (quickly). He will met (meet) friends who came (come) to visit. he (He ) will force (be forced) to use English whether he wants to or not.
As far as disadvantages are concerned, I see only one (one:) he may be treated like a baby. The family (family will) want to protect him from danger (dangerous) situations.
I will conclude by saying that even is the student has to put up (with) being treated like a child sometimes, he is better off the live (living) with an American family which they (who) can help home. He will find kindness and support when he is
new in the country. Also, he will speak English most of the time.
范文四(3分)
A foreing (foreign) student studying in America is wise to l