文档介绍：该【专八作文范文三篇 】是由【1781111****】上传分享，文档一共【9】页，该文档可以免费在线阅读，需要了解更多关于【专八作文范文三篇 】的内容，可以使用淘豆网的站内搜索功能，选择自己适合的文档，以下文字是截取该文章内的部分文字，如需要获得完整电子版，请下载此文档到您的设备，方便您编辑和打印。作文范文2000年Somepeoplesimplyseeeducationasgoingtoschoolsorcolleges,orasameanstosecuregoodjobs;,howimportantiseducationtomodernman?EducationAsaLifelongProcessWheneducationismentioned,wecaneasilythinkofschool,,educationissoimportantinmodemsocietythatitcanbeviewedasalifelongprocess.①First,it'stherequirementoffast-developingsociety,,whichisthebasictoolsforhim,,,,,-schools,adultcolleges,trainingcentersandevenlong-.(241words),inmyopinion,,providesequalopportunitiesforallstudents,,studentswhogethighermarksinexaminationmayenterabetterschool,andthosewhodonothavetoenterarelativelylessgood1one.,everystudentisprovidedwiththesamesourcesofeducation,,,posesachallenge,,teachersarethedominatorofeducation,,infact,mayresultinthelazinessofteachers,,astudentmaychooseanyteacher'sinstructionasfarashelikesit,,,,atthesametime,,,eleratethedevelopmentofeducation.,letusmaketheeducationofourcountryintoabetterexistence!(342)(2002),weneedanumberofhelps,eitherexternalorinternal,,suchassmartness,honesty,confidence,themostimportantone,inmyopinion,isdiligence.①,,,domore,.②,andnoemployerwillpromoteanidleone.③Inaddition,'.④(219words)SuggestedTitles:Goingabroadforfurtherstudy;HighdivorceRate;TeenagerSmoking;WillPhoneKillWriting;Money;SouthKoreaFad;OnRecreationandEntertainment;Advertisement;LosingWeight;GoingonDiet;LifelongEducation;ABoominAdultEducation;On2diplomaandCertificates;JobInterview;SharingHouseworkBenefitsChildren;MyViewpute(Robot,Mobiletelephone);Part-timeJob;ModernChild-ParentsRelationship;Opportunity;OnExamination;JobHunting;LivinginoroutoftheCampus;KeepingPets;。Whatisyouropinion?Writeanessayofabout400wordstostateyourview.(P154)----AnAngeloraDevil?Nowadays,“haveyoubeenontheline?”hasreplacedthetraditionalgreeting“Haveyouhadyourlunch?”-,sendinge-,:firstly,,theywillneglecttheirstudy;secondly,eindulgedintheworldofillusionswhichwillmakethemallthemoredifficulttoadapttotherealsocietylater;thirdly,putersforhoursrunning,andtoomuchexposurewillinevitablydogreatharmtotheirhealth,,thereisunhealthycontentaboutsex,crimesorviolence,’,“Thereisnofirewithoutsomesmoke.”Inmyopinion,weshouldmakescientificusewhilekeepingawayfromitsdregs,makingitahelpfulaidtohumanbeings.(248-26words)(Amplifiedversion)Nowadays,.Sowhenfriendsandclassmatesmeetwitheachother“Haveyoubeenontheline?”“Haveyouhadyoulunch?”-,,sende-mailstowhoevertheyliketo,and,thinkofit,increasetheirtradevolumewithintheirowndoors!Owingtotheexistenceofweb,thebarriersbetweendifferentean“EarthVillage”.Onthecontrary,:firstly,,theywillneglecttheirstudywhichwillworrytheirparentsandteacherswhocandonothingbutcallbars;secondly,-orientededucation;thirdly,someaddicts(“WebWorms”)putersforhoursrunning,andtoomuchexposurewillinevitablydogreatharmtotheirhealth,,,thereisunhealthycontentaboutsex,crimesorviolence,’,“Thereisnofirewithoutsomesmoke.”hasitsownadvantagesanddisadvantages(meritsanddemerits).,,makingitahelpfulaidtohumanbeings.(457words)CompanionshipOfBookspanyhekeeps;panionshipofbooksaswellasofmen;andoneshouldalwaysliveinthebestcompany,,;amusingandinstructingusinyouth,—,“Loveme,lovemydog.”Butthereismorewisdominthis:“Loveme,lovemybook.”,feel,,andheinthem.“Books,”saidHazlitt,“windintotheheart;thepoet’,.”Agoodbookisoftenthebesturnofalifeenshriningthebestthatlifecouldthinkout;fortheworldofaman’slifeis,forthemostpart,,thegoldenthoughts,which,rememberedandcherished,eforters.“Theyareneveralone,”saidSirPhilipSidney,“thatpaniedbynoblethoughts.”,,,whichareasfreshtodayaswhentheyfirstpassedthroughtheirauthor’sminds,;;;weseethemasiftheywerereallyalive;wesympathizewiththem,enjoywiththem,grievewiththem;esours,,-(appropriatechoiceofwords,avarietyinsentencepatterns)URACIES48-7Thetrasnlationreflectsalmostalltheoriginalpassagewithrelativelyfewsigprehendingindividualwords,phrases,(generallyclear,smoothandcohesive).URACIES36-5Thetrasnlationadequatelyreflectsmostoftheoriginalpassagewithfewprehendingindividualwords,phrases,,forthemostpart,-3Thetranslationonlyreflectsabouthalfoftheoriginalpassagewithprehendingindividualwords,phrases,,insomeparts,-,phrases,,formostpart,,orasameanstosecuregoodjobs;,howimportantiseducationtomodernman?EducationAsaLifelongProcessWheneducationismentioned,wecaneasilythinkofschool,,educationissoimportantinmodemsocietythatitcanbeviewedasalifelongprocess.①First,it'stherequirementoffast-developingsociety,,whichisthebasictoolsforhim,,,,,-schools,adultcolleges,trainingcentersandevenlong-.(241words)Li’sComments:①开门见山,开宗明义。符合要求。但字数少,body部分势必负担过重。②三个方面一个比一个瘦,应基本平衡或渐强。不要虎头蛇尾。第一方面有Forexample,2、3方面都没有forinstance,不公平。盖因时间关系。③结尾部分过于单薄