文档介绍：一篇成功申请哈佛大学 Essay 范文
以下这篇 Admission Essay,就是当年 Sameer H. Doshi 申请哈佛大学时递
交的。他现在已成为一名律师。
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Sameer 在美国的底特律长大,高中时他的随着家人移居加拿大。 Sameer
有色盲和音盲这两个题目,他在他的申请短文时解释为什么对于他来说,他在烹
饪的创造表现能力是有限的。他在文中很清楚地表达了他在追求烹饪达到完美而
获得的快乐,而且在人生中他也会有同样的态度。
很多学生家长都问我,有没有申请短文的模板。我告诉他们,假如你想得到
一篇好的文章,就一定要学生写出自己的 Admission Essay。写好后,可以由高
手一起共同研究,琢磨如何修改。但一定不要全部让他人代劳。看看这位同学是
如何写的吧。
My aim is creation. I love the idea of giving life to nothingness. Were I
another person in another time, I might spend my whole life tilling the
land. Just like the earliest farmers, the sight of dirt giving rise to carrots
and tomatoes at my whim feels like a miracle. I like to randomly burst out
in song. I like to shake my body. If I could I would be a pianist and a poet
and a painter and a politician. Unfortunately, in all these disciplines my
ability can't meet my enthusiasm. Where I can create, and break tired
codes, is in the kitchen. With unlimited time and resources I would
e the best pastry baker and the finest chef in all of the eastern
seaboard.
I really like food. On some drab school days I cheer myself up thinking
of the dinner awaiting me in the evening. Often I do a 24-hour fast to
ready my stomach for a huge meal. Now, being served this food is fine. It's
usually restful and rewarding to sit down after a long day to someone
else's careful work, whether they be paren