文档介绍：Composition Practice
No .3 High School
Wangjenfeng
1,Mistakes presenting and correcting错误辨析与纠正
1, Although the city 〔〕modern and convenient, there are have many problems.
1,Mistakes presenting and correcting错误辨析与纠正
2, I can enjoy fortable and quite life
3, in there, air( ) fresh and water( ) clean.
4,trees is green and birds is sing song.
1,Mistakes presenting and correcting错误辨析与纠正
5,I could go boating ,fishing and swimming in the lake.
6,all the things is interested .
7, it is good for my healthy.
1,Mistakes presenting and correcting错误辨析与纠正
8, Above all, I can learn many natural.
9, I also can do somethings to protect the environment.
10, I looking forward to the summer e.
2,范文赏析 sample
I will spend this summer holiday in the countryside. Although the city is modern and convenient, there are still some problems, such as air pollution, crowdedness and noise.
2,范文赏析 sample
In the countryside I can enjoy fortable and quiet life. There, the air is fresh and the water is clean. Trees are green and birds are singing. I also can go boating, fishing and swimming in the lake.
2,范文赏析
What’s more , I can climb the hills.
everything is interesting and good for my health. Because I can eat fresh vegetables and fruits. Above all , I can learn more about nature. I also can do something to protect the environment. I am looking forward to ing of my summer holiday.
3, and analyze
1,主语与谓语不一致的问题.
2,There be 结构不明确.
3,忽略与不考虑非谓语动词.
4,名词与代词的单复数.
5,词性掌握得不牢固.
6,物主代词不清楚.
7,不考虑时态与语态的问题.
4,针对性训练.(1)
主语与谓语不一致的问题.
A student have two book.
我的父母亲都是教师.