文档介绍：It is a simple but meaningful picture. A man wearing a pair of glasses is reading a book. He has learned from that book that a fish cannot live without water, so he puts his fishing rod into a well to fish. In his point of view, it is a wise decision. However, he is absolutely wrong because he didn’t really understand the sentence in the book. In this sentence, “water” refers to water in a pond, a river, a lake or the sea, not a well.
In my opinion, when we learn something new from books, we should understand it correctly before we put it into practice. Otherwise, we will make the same mistakes as the man in the picture.
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审题立意
“漫画是简笔而注重意义的一种绘画。”
——丰子恺
高考英语开放作文
开放作文属于命题作文,考生要根据所给命题,独立进行构思,并必须做适当的发挥。它在一定程度上考查了考生的写作能力,即要求考生根据写作动机选择相应的写作策略,并根据自己已经具备的相应知识完成写作。
开放作文试题特点:
1)借助一幅漫画,鼓励学生发散思维,表达自己对画面中内容的理解。
2)在观察、理解试题的前提下,从不同角度,展开想象,表达自己观点。
3)试题的趣味性与解题的挑战性;
4)能力的发展性与答案的开放性。
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这主要看画面特征及构图要素之间的关系,从特征中找到“话题”,从关系中找到“情节”,从而找到画面显示的显性主题。达到用描写性文字形象地描述图画的目的。
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依据画面意义和其寓意,展开联想。分别从相关、相似、相对、相反、因果、条件等诸多方面,联系现实生活,找到与画面主旨相对应的现实素材,尽量从不同的角度、不同的领域、不同的侧面来思考。
立足于画面内涵,着眼于现实生活。从画面与现实的“勾连”中,确定话题及立意的方向。
漫画
喜剧化
荒诞化
夸张化
拟人化
是对现实生活的
画面中越是夸张得厉害的地方越是问题的症结,
也越是体现寓意的地方
圆规骄傲
铅笔努力、执著
圆规原地徘徊
铅笔勇往直前
圆规可以画出精彩的圆
铅笔可以画出笔直的线
要注意透过夸张解读其寓意,理解漫画针对什么问题,表达了怎样的观点或思考
圆规骄傲,而铅笔努力、执著。宣扬一种奋斗精神。
圆规原地徘徊,而铅笔勇往直前。鼓励人们为实现人生目标而前进。
圆规可以画出精彩的圆,铅笔可以画出笔直的线。选择适当的工具完成不同的目标。
I think passes are reasonable to be proud because no one else can do the job better. At the same time, however, he should realize the pencil has his own advantages. The pencil can do other shapes better than passes, even pictures . So in my opinion, while we are confident in ourselves, we should recognize strengths in others and show our respect for them.
达到用议论性语言提炼或概括画面寓意的目的
用自己的语言对画面进行简明、清楚叙述
紧承叙述,引出观点(话题)(力求自然、准确)
联系实际,摆事实,讲道理(力求深度、力度)
综合上文,再申主旨( 力求完整、有力)
开放作文的四个步骤:
起
承
转
合
描图----解图----议图----圆图