文档介绍：PEP小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评
My English Teacher
    Miss Liu is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. She can sing and dance. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.
 【要领点评】
    这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”,是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山,直接点题,首先介绍了英语老师的姓名,然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。
在写作文时,要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组],以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。
My Days of the week
    I’m a student and I am in Grade 5. I go to school from Mondays to Fridays. I have Chinese and math every day. I have English on Tuesdays and Fridays. I have art on Wednesdays. And I have PE and music on Thursdays. I like Wednesdays . I don’t go to school on weekends. What about you?
【要领点评】
     这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”,小作者没有说一些空话,而是从自己的亲身经历写起,叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为,并特别强调了星期三的喜好,写得自然、流畅。
     小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化,要依据提示,结合自己的实际,写自己身边熟悉的事情。
My Favourite Food
 Do you know what is this?Guess! Its colour is yellow. It’s long and thin. It looks like a small boat. Oh, it is a banana.
Do you know what is that? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It’s round. It looks like a small ball. Oh, it is an orange. I like them very much. 
How about you? What’s your favourite food?
 【要领点评】
     My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章,小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物,而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。 
I can