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2014-11-10 谢侃 Kevin英语课堂
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【题】Which factor influences you the most when es to a major purchase: 1) mendations from your friends or colleagues;2) information from media; 3) salesman in the market
题型分类:对比题
论证角度:原因挖掘
观点选择:让步
开头:朋友同事的推荐影响最大。(话题引入+他人观点+明确立场+过渡)
When people plan to buy something that costs a great deal of money, they will think twice before making the final decision. Factors that will affect the decision might be mendations from friends and colleagues, information on media and words of salesman in the market. Among all those factors, I believe that what friends and colleagues say play the most important role in helping us with the decision-making. I am going to elaborate my point of view in the following paragraphs. (75 words)
中间段1:同事朋友比较靠谱。(主题句+说理论证+细节例子)
My first reason is that friends or colleagues’ words are reliable. When offering mendations for us to make a purchase, friends and colleagues are highly unlikely to lie to us about the quality of the goods while mercials and salesmen will try to convince customers to make the deal by any possible means out mercial purposes. Imagine that I want to buy a car, a salesperson probably mend me an expensive car that is beyond my purchasing power. Conversely, if I have a friend who is a car-lover, he will guide me to buy a car with a high quality-price ratio. (103 wor