文档介绍：基础写作训练
_ 学会运用
① Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. ② The sport , which first appeared in 1896, was ever suspended during the 1904 and 1928 Games. ③ It was only four years before the sport returned to the Olympic. ④ However, not until 1968 were women first allowed pete in the Olympic shooting. ⑤ With the sport ing more and more popular, it has grown steadily from just 3 shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.
广东08高考基础写作范文:
句子表达有何亮点?
写作中复合句常见的错误
,没有主句
The keeper who had lived in the light tower
for a long time, so he could keep calm in the
storm.
,把两个简单句当成一个句子
② The old man thought of his son, tears came
down from his face.
① The hall is different from all other buildings ,
it is made of glass.
,表达不自然
There are over fifty students in this school who
are going to take part in the sports meet next
Sunday.
Over fifty students in this school are going to
take part in the sports meet next Sunday.
② We were driving out into the country, and
we saw our English teacher riding in a bus,
and the bus was crowded.
① It is a beautiful day, and the sun is shining
and a breeze is blowing.
→ It is a beautiful day with the sun shining
and a breeze blowing.
→ As we were driving out into the country, we
saw our English teacher riding in a crowded
bus.
学会运用复合句和非谓语动词
① Kate is a new student.
② es from a northern province.
③ She speaks a dialect.
④ We find it hard to understand her dialect.
Kate, a new student from a northern province, speaks a dialect which we find hard to understand.
用一句话表达
不是人人都能学好英语,小学生同时学汉语和英语反而会影响汉语学习。
学会运用复合句和非谓语动词
第一步:拆分成几个简单句
①不是人人都能学好英语。
②小学生同时学汉语和英语。
③这会影响汉语学习。
第二步:分别翻译这几个简单句
① Not everyone is good at learning English.
② Children from primary school learn English
and Chinese at the same time.
③ This will affect their Chinese study.
① Not everyone is good at learning English.
② Child