文档介绍：必修 3 Units 1~2
话题之五——课外活动
三年5考
[2011四川]最近,某中学生英文报开设了“After-class Activities”的栏目,请你根据以下提示,为该栏目写一篇英文稿件,并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动。1. 你校开展课外活动的情况;2. 你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处; 3. 为同学选择课外活动提出建议; 4. 为学校开展课外活动提出建议。注意:词数100左右。
After-class Activities
Nowadays, after-class activities are ing more and more popular in high schools. In our school, there are various kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. We enjoy them very much. Playing football and reading stories are my favorites which do me lots of good. Besides building my body and enriching my knowledge,they also free me from the heavy work of study.
Here I have some suggestions. To students, you’d better choose the activities which interest you and suit you; to schools, they anize more activities for students and leave students more time for activities by giving them less homework.
Dear friends, please actively take part in after-class activities, which will not only make your school life colourful, but also improve your learning.
1. 本文话题内容切合高中学生生活实际,便于考生发挥。全文共分三段,内容符合试题要求,要点齐全。
①第一段介绍学校开展的课外活动情况以及自己所参加的课外活动及其好处。
②第二段介绍对学校和学生个人选择课外活动提出建议。
③第三段号召大家积极参与课外活动, 鼓励性强。
2. 全文行文流畅,使用词汇恰当。
①高级词汇和短语:various, do sb. lots of good, enrich, free. . . from. . . , suit, colourful
②高级句型:not only. . . but also. . .
③语篇过渡语:for example, besides, here I have. . .
【佳作习得】句型转换
Taking part in after-class activities not only makes your school life colourful but also improves your learning.
Not only _______________________________________________
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does taking part in after-class activities make your
school life colourful but also improves your learning.
要想把一篇文章写好,不仅要注意行文通顺与连贯、过渡与衔接等,还要对文章进行润色,尝试使用高级词汇和复杂句式,以增加文章的亮点,给阅卷者留下深刻的印象。
基础指导(五)——润色提升
一、巧设开头和结尾
1. 开头
常见的开头方式有开门见山式、描述主题式、提供背景知识式、小故事引导式、提出问题式、设置悬念式、倒叙式和名言引入式等。
2. 结尾
结尾的方法有很多,如总结式、重复式、结论式、暗示式和求解式等。
二、准确地道表达
1. 注意同义词的分辨
a little boy小男孩(有可爱之意)
a small boy小男孩(强调身材瘦小)
2. 恰当使用限定词
用词准确,从另一个角度来讲就是要使论述客观、适度,这就需要考生适当使用一些限定词,以避免观点的绝对化,从而提高说服力