文档介绍：假如你是李华,从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参加。请些一封电子邮件申请参加。
内容主要包括:
(包括英语能力)
2. 参加意图(介绍中国,了解其他国家)
3. 希望获准。
注意:
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好
审题
:
2. 人称:
3. 时态
4. 要点:
应用文---书信
第一人称单数
现在范畴,将来范畴
个人情况
参加夏令营目的
希望获得批准
构思—写作的基本思路
交代自己的身份
说明写信的目的或原因
介绍自己的情况(英语能力,是试题要求必须写的)(重点在于让对方觉得你符合条件)
为什么要参加(介绍中国,了解其他国家,这是试题给出,必写内容,还可添加其他理由)
希望获准
结尾
消息来源
on the ;the summer camp;announcement
I read the announcement of the summer camp.
You posted on the
I’m interested in it.
I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the and I am interested it.
One possible version
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the and I am interested in it. I know that you e students from different countries and I’d like to take part in it. I’ve been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, I’ll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.
Looking forward to your reply!
Regards,
Li Hua
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