文档介绍：令人惊喜的生日派对
小朋友,当你们自己生日的时候,你们有什么特别的感觉呢?很多人到了他们生日的时候,心情会特别地好,因为那天会收到令人惊喜的生日礼物。我们就把这种期待的心情,写在作文开始的地方吧。我们第一段的建议开头句就是:Today is my birthday and I'm so excited about it.
大家在生日的时候,一定有什么特别的庆祝活动吧,像吃蛋糕、唱生日快乐歌、吹蜡烛等等, 虽然,每年的庆祝模式可能都很像,但是当时间快到庆祝我们生日的时候,大家一定都很期待吧。我们第二段的建议开头句就是:When it was time to leave school I couldn't wait to go home.
作文题目是令人惊喜的生日派对,那么一定有什么地方跟平常不一样,别卖关子了,在文章的最后,赶快把答案公布出来吧。我们第三段的建议开头句就是:And then, things pletely.
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第一段:Today is my birthday and I'm so excited about it.
第二段:When it was time to leave school I couldn't wait to go home.
第三段:And then, things pletely.
Today is my birthday and I'm so excited about it. In the morning I put a note on the table for my mum and it said, "Today is my birthday, don't forget it!"At school, I got many gifts and cards from my classmates and had a lot of fun. But I was still expecting the birthday party after school.
When it was time to leave school I couldn't wait to go home. When I open the door,there wasn't anybody in the house. There was only a note that said, "Coming home late tonight, mum and dad." I try to call them but there was no answer. I was so shocked,do they forget my birthday? How could this be! I was so sad that I couldn't eat anything. I just did my homework and waited for them.
And then, things pletely. It was about time for dinner, my mother called and told me to go to the