文档介绍：通过高考作文分析指导写作
书面表达的五个步骤
仔细审题(4确定)

(1)体裁格式_________
(2)题材内容_________
(3)中心人称_________
(4)主体时态_________
假设你是卜曼宜,,,用英文写一封电子邮件.
: 手机不响铃,不能发短信;该产品已售完,无法更换;型号新,无配件,无法维修.
: 公司应尽快予以更换.
注意:;
: 配件(spare part)
Think about……?
The style:
The main idea:
Person:
Tense:
The style: exposition
The main idea: Present the problems with the phone and ask for a change
Person: the first person
Tense: the present tense (描述具体经历时则要用一般过去时)
,确定重点词汇
要点:三大问题+一个要求
Point 1: not ring;
send messages
Point 2:sold out;
change…for…
或exchange…for…
或replace…with…
,确定重点词汇
Point 3:model;
no spare parts;
repair/fix/maintain
Point 4:require/request sb. to do sth
或demand of sb. to do sth.

,不能发短信
It doesn’t ring . It doesn’t send short messages.
,无法更换
The model has been sold out . They can’t change a new one for me.
,无配件,无法维修
It is a new model in China. It is impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.

I demand of /require/request pany to change a new one for me as soon as possible.
4. 组句成篇
(1)适当添加信息点,
使文意通顺连贯
(2)巧妙使用连接词,
使文章结构紧凑
(3)灵活运用好句式,
使文章文采飞扬