读后续写 - 动作细节描写ppt课件.ppt

文档介绍：,Janeandherhusband,Tom,,,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom.“I'mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp”andwalkedaway. Withnopathtofollow,,,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,.“Tom!”shecried."Help!" ,butthefarthershewalked,,,. Janeroseatthebreakofday,(滴落),. Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,?Unfortunately,,,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.().小结动作细节的描写应该围绕着一个中心展开,否则会导致叙述散乱,内容混杂;动作细节的描写应该组织一系列的动词,以动作的次第发生来叙述整个过程;动作细节的描写应该有相应信息的支撑,以丰富细节内容,增强可读性。.,过程却不太顺利。请设计一个情节,描述具体经过,词数80左右。LastSunday,,过程