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一复****br/>二模板识记、积累&检查
二如何制造亮点词语
三如何制造亮点句型
复****br/>模板识记、积累&检查
如何制造亮点词语
1选用具体的词
平时学****时，就要注意积累具体词，并使之成为活跃词汇。这样实战时，才能随手运用。
good food pk tasty/fresh food
原句：No one saw the bank being broken into.
优化：No one witnessed the bank being broken into.
原句：Please try our best to help this girl, help her to pass the most difficult period in life, and make her financial burden less and less.
优化：Please try our best to help this girl, help her to pass the most difficult period in life, and relieve her financial burden.
2注意区分近义词
学****时，注意区分含义的微妙差异，从而在运用时，用词恰当。
原句：Nuclear proliferation is always the top problem the participants have to discuss at this kind of meeting.
→issue
issue [a topic that is often discussed or argued about, especially a social or political matter that affects the interests of a lot of people]尤指社会或政治方面的〕议题；争论的问题
•Abortion is a highly controversial issue. 堕胎是个很有争议的话题。
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problem [a situation that causes difficulties]
I’ve been having a few problems with my car.
3学会活用不同的词性
汉语则较多使用动词、形容词，而英语中常用名词。
所以，要想地道、制造亮点，要学会多用名词
原句：After we observed them carefully and analyzed them critically, we may identify the conceptions that will actually contribute to the social development.
优化：Through careful observation and critical analysis …
4恰当使用限定用语
限定用语的使用可以使论述更加客观、适度，避免观点的绝对化，提高说服力和可信度。
常见的限定词：
mainly, generally, in general, typically, mostly, almost, for the most part;
may, maybe, perhaps, probably;
sometimes, to some extent, to some degree…
亮点词语改写练****br/>I’d like to make every effort to let more people know the idea that waste is disgraceful, and call on all my schoolmates to fight against waste.(用更具体的词)
I’m sure you will soon find a good candidate for the position.(用更具体的词)
People who are good at dealing with social relations admit their mistakes, and take their share of blame. (用介词短语改写)
如何制造亮点句型
长句短句搭配使用
在实际写作中,一味地采用长句或短句都是不可取的,要长短句交替使用。
开头&结尾：用长句，吸引阅卷老师注意力
正文：一般来说,写作中是以简单句为基础,适当配以并列句和复合句。