文档介绍:The World of English Writing
沙河中学 张爱琴
我的目标我努力
People introduction
topic
Employment. Introducing people.
Examination
Introduction. Application . speech
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Social problem
topic
Education. Health care . Employment Environment protection 。Advertisement. Harmonious society. Sports. family etc.
examination
model
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School life
topic
Learning. life. School introduction. Examination.
Friendship. birthday. Experience on the way home. Activity .travel. etc.
examination
A letter. Notice. diary. Speech. Debating. Note etc
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Opening composition
挑战自我
1贫困地区的教育引起了人们极大的关注,
2 由于受传统观念的影响, 经费投入不足,师资短缺等诸多因素的制约,义务教育在这些地区的开展面临着种种困难,
3 我们应该想办法去解决目前的这种状况
范文
点评
①Education has become a common part of people’s life. ② And nine years compulsory education has always Aroused the greatest concern. ③What impresses us most is that education in poor areas is facing many difficulties.
④The reasons are varied. Among the various reasons ,traditional idea plays an important part. For example ,people in these regions are unwilling to send their daughters to school .because the custom is to educate boys rather girls, ⑤What’s more, investment in education is limited because of poverty ⑥.in addition. most teachers don’t want to work there.
⑦when we talk about how to solve the problem ⑧ on the one hand ,government should provide “complete, free and compulsory primary education for all children in these regions.⑨ on the other hand, we should try to change their old ideas
⑩1n brief, reaching the target of nine years compulsory education there need all of us to work together.
①确定主题
②缩小范围
③引出要说明的事情
④ 阐述原因
⑤原因之一
⑥原因之二
⑦谈论措施
⑧措施之一
⑨措施之二
⑩表明观点,发出倡议
套用模块演练一
①________ has become a common part of people’s life.
②__________ has always aroused the greatest concern.
③What impresses us most is _________.
④The reasons are varied. Among the various
reasons ,___________ plays an