Chapter 2 SAT写作评分标准.pdf

文档介绍：Chapter 2 SAT 写作评分标准
1、官方指南评分标准 OG（106）
总结好的文章有如下要素
A 观点明确
B 论证部分结构清楚 （总分总）
C 例子细节充分
D 能适时点题议论
E 语言合理
这五点是长期教学后得出的经验，会在之后的章节中不断阐述。
2、4-6 分档文章中间段例子鉴赏
话题 1 ：Can something unsuccessful have some have value? (Is it possible to find value out of
something unsuccessful?)
分析：作为这个题目，文眼是不成功的事情 ---价值
所以中间段例子的阐述顺序是
1 不成功事物的细节
2 过渡
3 价值是什么
接下来首先参看 4 分（及格分）范文中间段
例 子 1 1For instance ("For example" seems more appropriate for introducing a scientific or
anecdotal independent clause.), the Columbia disaster. 2Columbia was destroyed in an accident
when the shuttle tried to re-enter the atmosphere. 3This accident was a horrific failure and many
people were were upset about it. (This accident was a horrific failure and upsetted many people)
3The value, though, comes from the new way in which we now look at things. 4Because (Through
the accident) of Columbia, the space program now know what is wrong. Hopefully, they will
change it.
点评：1 片段句，for instance 后面需要是一个完整的句子。
2 不成功的描述还可以更加细节。
3 点题做的还不错，提示考官上文在讲失败，下文要说价值。
4 价值写的十分笼统，细节太少。
例 子 2 1Vietnam is also an example of something not successful. We went to Vietnam in an
attempt to get rid of communists (rid the country of communists). The war went (dragged) on for a
while (删除 ), but (and) we were not able to win. 2Many soldiers were killed and 3the public we