文档介绍：莎士比亚十四行诗翻译的比较-译国译民翻译公司
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莎士比亚十四行诗翻译的比拟
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在莎士比亚的154首十四行诗中，其中以第十八首最为脍炙人口，它的音韵特点为五音步抑
扬格〔pentameter iambic〕，韵式也是典型的“莎士比亚体〞〔Shakespearean〕，即：ABAB，CDCD，EFEF，GG。诗歌原文如下：
Sonnet 18
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day? A
Thou art more lovely and more temperate: B
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May, A
And summer's lease hath all too short a date: B
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines, C
And often is his gold complexion dimm'd; D
And every fair from fair sometime declines, C
By chance or nature's changing course untrimm'd; D
But thy eternal summer shall not fade, E
Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow’st; F
Nor shall Death brag thou wander'st in his shade, E
When in eternal lines to time thou grow’st: F
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So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, G
So long lives this and this gives life to thee. G
本文将对梁宗岱、屠岸、戴镏龄、辜正坤翻译的四个版本，从音节，韵脚，标点以及内容四个方面进展比照分析。他们的译文分别如下：
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