文档介绍：智课网 TOEFL 备考资料托福写作中式英文修订摘要: 本篇文章从中式英文的问题点和案例分析托福写作中式英文修订,考生可以参考一下,在平时的备考中多多练****使自己的写作更加地道。同学们常常因为找不到托福精品资料而烦恼,在这里小编为大家分享一些考生经常搜寻的资料,以便节省大家时间, 能够最大程度上帮大家有效的提高托福水平。周一至周六(上午 9: 30-12 : 30下午 1: 30-6 : 30) 免费分享托福资料扫描二维码获得完整版托福写作中式英文修订中式英文的问题点英语和汉语表达有区别,如果在英语写作中套汉语思维,就是中式化英语的表现。这只能使文章语言蹩脚、冗赘。所以考生在平时阅读英语材料和练****写作时,要注意英语表达和汉语表达的差别,切忌在写作中硬套汉语思维。中式英文案例分析 1、 Original: If we agree to say that school offers us the best book knowledge acquisition then our society offers us the best surviving techniques ina hard way. Revised: If we agree that school offers the best method for the acquisition of book knowledge, then our society offers us the best method for mon sense or“ street smarts ”. Agree to say that 表达中式化,只需要 agree that 即可;the best book knowledge acquisition 改为 the best method for the acquisition of book knowledge( 学校给我们提供了获取书本知识的最好方法)更为恰当,同样,后面的 the best surviving techniques 改为 the best method for mon sense...; 加上 street marks( 街头智慧)给文章的词汇增添色彩。 2、 Original: They can spend more time studying education munication to improve their role asa mother, wifes and daughter. Revised: They can also decide to spend more time studying, education themselves, in order to improve themselves in their roles as mothers, wives and daughters. 原句中 studying education munication 的说法中式化,不符合英语的表述,应该为 s