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If we have five million dollars
will happen if we
Money isn' t everything, but everybody needs money. What have five million dollars? I asked some of my friends this interesting question and here' s what they said.
Alice said she would buy a robot for her mother. Because she has a big family, mother is supposed to do too much housework. Alice doesn, t want her mother to be tired. Davy said he wanted to give money to charities. He wishes to help poor children to study and keep heaIthy. How kind the boy is! And in order to become a professional basketball player, Harry will buy a basketball team with the money. What an interesting and exciting decision!
Different people have different opinions. I will travel all over the world to open up my eyes if I have so much money. As we know, it' s certain that money can help people make some dreams come true, but we should make good use of money and do something meaningful for the society. Do you agree with me? (8. 1巩雪宁)
评语:本文围绕如果有五百万美元,将会做什么的话题讨论。作者审题精确,分别按要 求谈论了 Alice Davy Harry及作者自己的观点,句式表达精彩语言流畅,层次清晰,衔 接自然。作者总结段落号召读者合理使用金钱,为社会做有意义的事情,很巧妙的升华了 主题,值得借鉴学****br/>Dear Pet er,
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