文档介绍:Error Correction
改错突破
Checklist
1. 缺词/多词 11. 定语从句的关系词
2. 名词:数;可数性 12. 前后照应
3. 形容/副词:形式/级 a. 主谓一致
4. 近义 b. 时态一致
5. 搭配 c. 指代一致
6. 时态/语态 d. 修辞一致
7. 动词 13. 逻辑关系:
8. 虚拟语气连词/连接性副词
9. 非谓语动词反义词
10. As/like结构其它
1 缺词/多词
缺漏及赘述错误主要表现为漏掉介词、代
词、关系词、冠词、连词等或重复意义相
同或相近的词语以及出现两个主语等。
单数可数名词一般前应有冠词,但有些固
定搭配中不用冠词
Dishwashers and washing machines do
jobs that were once done by the hand.
by (the) hand by hand
1 缺词/多词
不及物动词作谓语的关系代词前的介词
I suddenly realized that my own parents are the
ones whom I can rely.
(on) whom
不及物动词后接宾语应添加介词
But perhaps we should look at both sides of the
coin before arriving hasty conclusions.
This leads changes in the way of life.
arriving (at) / leads (to)
固定搭配中是否缺介词,注意隔离修饰
In every home a stereo or television will fill the
rooms sound.
fill the rooms (with) sound
短语中是否漏词
句子结构是否完整
In the eenth century, farm work and life
were not much changed from that they had
been in the old days.
Thatwhat (原从句缺少宾语)
定语从句中是否多了主语和宾语
More examples
We have to make clear to each worker
that everybody must observe these
rules.
make make it
宾语为动词不定式或从句时,必须在动词
与宾语补足语之间加上形式宾语it。
Though we have known great deal about
space,we still have a lot to learn.
great deal a great deal (修饰不可数名词)
The songs sounded via radios in
restaurants,from cars passing on the
highways and shoeshine(擦皮鞋)
parlors.
and (in) shoeshine parlors
此处应是与前面词组in restaurants和from
cars并列的介词短语
Both natural and synthetic man-made rubber
are of little value in their raw state.
去掉synthetic或man-made
Monsoon winds(季风),sometimes masked
by other features of the general atmospheric
circulation,they are associated with nearly all
large continental land masses.
去掉they 同Monsoon winds重复
2 名词