文档介绍：高中英语建议信课件
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如何算是一篇好文章？
－覆盖了所有的要点
－应用了较多的语法结构和词汇
－有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。
要点全
词汇,句型（高的题材是什么？
要写的文章主题是什么 (topic)
怎样安排信息点的顺序？
(order)
动作是什么时候发生的？(时态)
(when)
第一人称
一封信
建议政府采取措施舒缓交
通拥挤的状况
说理逻辑性
一般现在时
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适当运用模板
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Dear Bob,
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题).
Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句不同的句式提出建议)
As to , I suggest (有时根据需要具体到某一反面). In addition, (其他建议). I'm sure (预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心).
I'm looking forward to (表达愿望).
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
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Dear____,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to _____, and I’ll try to make some conductive suggestions here.
In my humble opinion(以我拙见), you would be wise to take the following actions: _____.
I hope you’ll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.
Good luck with you.
Yours,
XXX
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第二步：搜索相关词组或句型
问题
建议
学校和一所小学毗邻，对着大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小, 家长接送。交通更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。
政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。
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学校与一所小学毗邻,对着大街
stand next to… primary… face/be faced with… the main street…
There’s a primary school near our school, and both schools face the main street.
Our school stands next to a primary school, faced with/facing the main street.
推荐句型：There be+并列句
非谓语结构
Standing next to a primary school, our school is faced with/faces the main street.
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润色小建议
Next to a primary school
将介词短语提前（全倒装）
stands/lies/is our school
, faced with / facing a main street.
可将stand next to替换为高级词汇/短语
be located next to (near/beside/by)
border/adjoin vt.
be adjacent to与…毗邻
在…对面 be opposite to
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The traffic is busy during the rush hours.
高峰期